That works.
The main things I am seeing...
Lose the Disney handcuffs. They aren't in the CRL and as such are an unapproved accessory (even though plenty of us, myself included, own and troop with them)
Your holster is on the wrong side? It should be on the left hand side for ANH, right for ESB/ROTJ.
Boots are not correct, you want something from ImperialBoots or TKBoots preferably. There are other options on Amazon that will at least get you through the door, but those aren't much more expensive and are much better quality, and more accurate.
Your ab buttons are wrong - looks like you used a mix of the correct part as well as parts meant for your belt (to cover rivets).
It should look like this:
Not this:
General fit of parts could be better. Shoulder bells are flaring out and may be too big. Cod piece is very low and covers up your thigh armor.
Thigh ammo pack looks like it had the corners over-trimmed, may not be an issue but if possible you may want to look into fixing/replacing it. It should look like this:
Probably more I've missed, those are the big ones I noticed right away though. Your suit is fixable, don't get discouraged. Hope this helps!