Nice work trooper, just a couple of things you could do to really shine.
Knee ammo strip has some return edge left on the top, you can see the curve and trim line.
You could also increase the size of the curve on the bottom of the thigh ammo strip.
Teeth should not have any paint on the gums, from the CRL: Frown is painted gray and does not leave the teeth area.
Thigh cover strip should be cut straight across not angled
Appears you cut the bottom of the sniper plate on angles, should be straight across, but see what the DO's say
You could also trim a little more off your smaller ab plate
Helmet brow for a "Stunt" is a little low but again up to the DO's. Normally the "Hero" version has a lower brow
On a few images your drop boxes don't look like they are in alignment with the end of the belt, you may need to add a couple dabs of E600 to help them stay there.
Good luck with approval.