Nice job on this armor, John.. always great to see another Hero headed for EI! There are a few issues that will not affect your EI approval, but will need to be addressed before you apply for level 3. The D.O.s will give you more information on those.
One of the things that I noticed is that you have a pretty large gap between your shoulder bells and chest plate. You did the absolute correct thing in removing all the return edges on the bottoms (screen accurate), but it looks like the curve is too tight (photo 1). This is also causing the bells to not sit flush with the bicep (see reference image below).
You can use a hot water bath to gently re-shape the bells to give them more of a flare (photo 2). This will allow them to sit closer to the bicep and reduce that gap quite a bit. You should also tighten up the connection on the shoulder bridge/shoulder bell connection on the right (the left one is perfect) which will help as well. If you need any info. on how to do a hot water bath, just PM me.
Reference image
You may also be asked to add a photo of your abdomen armor showing the snap on the top right side (known as the "Han" snap). This should be silver/chrome in color with the inside of the snap facing outward.
One quick item that will not affect approval (but you may want to do) is remove the small bit of ABS at the top of your right thigh. The reason being is that it can snag on your under suit. It should also stop it poking into you while you walk, lol. 30 seconds with a Dremel would solve this quickly!
Overall a sharp looking set of armor, John, and I expect to see an Expert Infantry badge under you name soon!