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These shall be securely mounted in front and may free float in back. They may be affixed with rivets, Velcro, or adhesive
No visible rivets are allowed.
Shoulder straps shall not have a flat end at the ends of them. They shall be ribbed 100%.
These shall be glued in front.
These shall be affixed in the back (no snaps, rivets or brads shall be visible).
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03. Shoulder Straps:
These shall be securely mounted in front and may free float in back. They may be affixed with rivets, Velcro, or adhesive
No visible rivets are allowed.
Shoulder straps shall not have a flat end at the ends of them. They shall be ribbed 100%.
These shall be affixed in the front (no snaps, rivets or brads shall be visible).
These shall be affixed in the back (no snaps, rivets or brads shall be visible).
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