Tomonkas[TK] Posted October 5, 2018 Report Share Posted October 5, 2018 Tomas Monja Castellano/501st TK ID: 70103/Tomonkas/Spanish Garrison Costume Information Armor: Shepperton Design Studio Helmet: Shepperton Design Studio Blaster: Shepperton Design Studio Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gmrhodes13[Staff] Posted October 5, 2018 Report Share Posted October 5, 2018 Nice work, just a couple of things, you can't really see much black border around your ears. You may need to extend the grey on the ends of the teeth. You may also be asked for a photo of your D ring on the end of the blaster. Belt boxes should be aligned with the end of the belt. Are the screws on your TD pan head, they look domed? A couple of things you could do to improve the overall look: Brow trim is a little high. Ideally the tube stripes should really be positioned a pencil width on the cheeks. Butt plate is sticking out from the back plate. Good luck with approval Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TK-40996[TK] Posted October 6, 2018 Report Share Posted October 6, 2018 What our fellow trooper said ! Goodluck further with your application! 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
justjoseph63[Staff] Posted October 13, 2018 Report Share Posted October 13, 2018 Hi Tomas! We will be with your shortly, sir, but could you please post up a close-up photo of the front of your boots? Thanks! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tomonkas[TK] Posted October 14, 2018 Author Report Share Posted October 14, 2018 Ok Shortly will up that you ask me. Thanks! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pistolero[TK] Posted October 14, 2018 Report Share Posted October 14, 2018 good job brother trooper! eres un maquina amigo mio. 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
acetilacetato[TK] Posted October 14, 2018 Report Share Posted October 14, 2018 Good job Tomas!Enviado desde mi SM-N950F mediante Tapatalk 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tomonkas[TK] Posted October 14, 2018 Author Report Share Posted October 14, 2018 On 13/10/2018 at 11:06, justjoseph63 said: Hola tomas Estaremos con usted en breve, señor, pero ¿podría publicar una foto de cerca de la parte delantera de sus botas? ¡Gracias! Hi, I upload the photos of the boots. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
justjoseph63[Staff] Posted October 14, 2018 Report Share Posted October 14, 2018 Thank you! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
justjoseph63[Staff] Posted October 17, 2018 Report Share Posted October 17, 2018 Working on your submission now, sir. Thanks for your patience!! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
darKcito[TK] Posted October 17, 2018 Report Share Posted October 17, 2018 Congrats, pal!!!! Good luck 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
justjoseph63[Staff] Posted October 21, 2018 Report Share Posted October 21, 2018 Hola, Tomas, welcome and thank you for your EIB application. Let's have a look, brother..CRL and EIB Application Requirements:All the required submission photos have been posted., your armour displays all necessary element as set out in the level 2 CRL, Congratulations on a job well done!. Other-Armor Fit/Assembly:In this section we review observations made by your fellow troopers and ourselves. Some observations may lead to suggestions to improve the overall look of your armor. If any suggestions affects any application, it will be listed below. Let's start from the top, mi hermano.. 1. As mentioned by Glen, the paint on your frown should come down more at the corners. Reference image 2. Your brow is sitting really high and should come down to just above the eyes. Yes, some of the screen used helmets were higher, but the vast majority sat much lower. Reference images 3. The black outline around your ears should be more distinct, and there should be no gray paint outside of the black line. Reference image 4. Your left forearm needs to be lowered to match the right one for symmetry. I would suggest lengthening the stap just a bit and you will be in good shape. Reference image 5. I would suggest making the strapping for your back/kidney connection a little longer. Right now it overlaps a bit. Reference image 6. The cover strips on the tops of the thighs could use a little "Dremel love" and be trimmed down, especially the right one. This should make it easier to walk as well! Reference image 7. Your TD is sitting too high, and should be lowered to where the top of the clips are touching the top of your belt. Reference image 8. Your top of your posterior plate needs to adjusted to where it does not overlap the bottom of the kidney plate. 9. Your large ab-button plate looks GREAT, but the smaller 4 button one could use some trimming for screen accuracy/ 10. The D-ring on your blaster needs to be painted black. 11. The magazine on your E-11 is facing the wrong way. The curve needs to face forward, making the hourglass indentation on the side (circled in blue) face toward the rear. Reference image Centurion Suggestions:In this section we prepare you the best we can for Centurion. If there are any areas of concern they will be discussed here. 1. The gap between the shoulder bells and shoulder strap will have to be tightened up, which will bring them closer to your chest/back plates. I noticed that you still have some return edge on the bottoms of the shoulder bells which can be completely removed. This will help as well. As per the CRL for Centurion, "There should be a minimal gap between the shoulder armor and the chest/back plates". Reference image 2. Your left ab/kidney connection is PERFECT, but you will need to tighten up the one on your right. Reference image 3. The screws on your TD are of the round-head type, and will need to be changed out to the flat "pan-head" style/ 4. As listed in the CRL for level 3, you will need to add one "rank stripe" to your ear bar. Front, back or middle... it's your choice! Reference image You have a little work in front of you, but I feel confident that you can get these issues taken care of so that we will be seeing your Centurion submission in the near future! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
giskard8[Staff] Posted October 21, 2018 Report Share Posted October 21, 2018 Congratulations! Keep up the good work Trooper. 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gmrhodes13[Staff] Posted October 21, 2018 Report Share Posted October 21, 2018 Congratulations trooper 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
acetilacetato[TK] Posted October 21, 2018 Report Share Posted October 21, 2018 Congrats TomasEnviado desde mi SM-N950F mediante Tapatalk 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lionel Noronha Gallardo[TK] Posted October 21, 2018 Report Share Posted October 21, 2018 (edited) Muy bien Tomasin !!! Edited October 21, 2018 by Lionel Noronha Gallardo update link 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tomonkas[TK] Posted October 21, 2018 Author Report Share Posted October 21, 2018 Thank you all, justjoseph63, I will follow your advice, Thank you. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ToniML[TK] Posted October 21, 2018 Report Share Posted October 21, 2018 Felicidades Tomas!!!! Un gran trabajo, sí Señor!! Congratulations Tomas!!!! Nice work, yes Sir!! Ahora a por el Centurion!! Now to reach the Centurion level!! 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Harbinger[IPM] Posted October 22, 2018 Report Share Posted October 22, 2018 Congratulations. 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Traumtrooper[TK] Posted October 22, 2018 Report Share Posted October 22, 2018 Wow What a surprise my friend!!!Congratulations!!! Great workEnviado desde mi SM-N960F mediante Tapatalk 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Oki[TK] Posted October 22, 2018 Report Share Posted October 22, 2018 Congratulation trooper, good work! Welcome to the rank! 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TK-40996[TK] Posted October 22, 2018 Report Share Posted October 22, 2018 Congratulations !!! 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
darKcito[TK] Posted October 27, 2018 Report Share Posted October 27, 2018 Congrats, my friend!!!! Glad of you and your new rank; enjoy it!! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lucnak[TK] Posted November 14, 2018 Report Share Posted November 14, 2018 Congrats on getting your EIB! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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