That is definitely different than mine. Mine is what I consider a first generation since I was in the first tier orders. Mine has no Anovos or LFL markings anywhere on the armor or helmet. I dare to say that it looks like they are improving quality by the looks of your helmet.
Your build looks great. Good luck! This is my belt inside picture, so you know what they are looking for. Just FYI.
You might consider covering those holster screw heads with some tape or similar. They will end up digging into your armor.
Congrats on getting that kit. I recommend looking at build threads and going from there. If you have questions, ask before you take the leap. We will help.
The IOC site will be of great help when it comes to doing Imperial Officer uniforms. I am a TK but I also do an Officer and I got a lot of help there. Welcome to FISD!
LOL, these boots, if painted well, should get you through even the highest approvals because they are constructed in a "movie accurate" way. Just a different color (for now). By the way, many troopers go this route.
They look fine. A lot of boots only have the pull tabs on the back. Select a paint that would be good for leather and tape off those soles. I think you're in business.
Did you know how many kids you were visiting in advance? I'd like to take some things to give to the kids, but I am not sure how much or what. (I have a childrens hospital troop next week)