Dave, you are missing a couple pictures:
a picture of the back of the TD to show the screws/clips
an action shot pic
close up pic of the ab buttons details
cod/butt snap/rivet connection
Extra enhances to the armor:
the cod rivet should not be painted white
you may also want to tighten up the shoulder bells closer to your traps
also, the shims on your ab/kidney connection should be seamless
Good luck bud, U.K. and Sly should be with you soon enough; it looks like they are backed up a bit with the holidays.