Manvi Viztoria[TK] Posted July 19, 2023 Report Share Posted July 19, 2023 Name: Manvi ID: TK-16970 Username: Manvi Viztotia Garrison: Spanish Garrison Armor Maker:Armour Factory Props (AFP) Helmet Maker: Armour Factory Props Height/Weight: 1,80m. 64kgrs. Boot Maker: Valverde del camino Canvas Belt Supplier: AFP Neck Seal: AFP Hand Guard: AFP Holster Maker: AFP Profile Link; https://www.501st.com/members/displaymember.php?userID=35695&costumeID=124 2 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
justjoseph63[Staff] Posted July 19, 2023 Report Share Posted July 19, 2023 Thanks for submitting for Expert Infantry, Manvi! Before the D.O.s get here, just a couple of things that you might want to address: Helmet: 1. Your tube stripes are sitting pretty far away from the "cheek" and will probably need to be moved up. As per the CRL, Ideally, the tube stripes are positioned approximately a pencil width from the side of the cheek. You may want to make them a bit shorter as well... The screens on your Hovi tips are sticking out past the rims and need to be inside the rims with no edges of the screens showing. Your boots seem to be really well made, but unfortunately the soles appear to be textured/ribbed. As stated in the CRL they must have a flat sole as seen in the screen used photo reference. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gmrhodes13[Staff] Posted July 19, 2023 Report Share Posted July 19, 2023 Nice work trooper, a couple of other things you may want to d before the DO's arrive Blaster scope rail is pretty bent, also missing a cocking lever Some rough areas on the barrel you may want to fill and repaint Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
toniltd[TK] Posted July 19, 2023 Report Share Posted July 19, 2023 Buen trabajo Manvi, tu armadura tiene muy buenos detalles, tu esfuerzo seguro que será recompensado, un fuerte abrazo.Enviado desde mi M2103K19G mediante Tapatalk Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TKSpartan[Staff] Posted July 19, 2023 Report Share Posted July 19, 2023 Hola Manvi, gracias por aplicar para EIB . Excelente trabajo con tu armadura. Unos detalles y estarás lista. He agregado tu solicitud y uno de nosotros estará contigo tan pronto sea posible. Hi Manvi. Thanks for applying for EIB. Great work with your armor. just a few details and you'll be ready. One of us will be with you as soon as possible. Added to the line. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nairy[Staff] Posted July 20, 2023 Report Share Posted July 20, 2023 9 hours ago, justjoseph63 said: Since it is lit up from the inside it is quite hard to tell exactly! I'd take new pictures in normal lighting, and step away from the helmet with the camera and zoom in to take the picture, some of these images on the helmet seem to be a little warped and can make things look like something they are not! 2 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chemi[Staff] Posted July 20, 2023 Report Share Posted July 20, 2023 Hola Manvi. Voy a ser el DO encargado de revisar tu solicitud. Cómo bien te han indicado anteriormente, hay que hacer una serie de arreglos antes de poder continuar con tu solicitud. Estaremos aquí para ayudarte en lo que necesites. Hi Manvi. I am going to be the DO who will review your application. As indicated above, there are a few fixes that need to be made before we can proceed with your application. We will be here to help you with whatever you need. -Las malla de tus puntas Hovi sobresalen del borde y tienen que estar un poco hacia adentro. -The screens on your Hovi tips are sticking out past the rims and need to be inside the rims with no edges of the screens showing. Reference image -Tus botas parecen estar muy bien hechas, pero desafortunadamente las suelas parecen ralladas. El CRL indica que deben tener suela plana, como se ve en lafoto de referencia. -Your boots seem to be really well made, but unfortunately the soles appear to be textured/ribbed. As stated in the CRL they must have a flat sole as seen in the screen used photo reference. Reference image -El bláster necesita algunos ajustes. -The blaster also needs some fixes. Sabemos que no es lo que esperas cuando compras una armadura montada, pero no te desanimes, estamos aquí para ayudarte. We know it's not what you expect when you buy a full commission armor, but don't be discouraged, we are here to help you. 2 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Manvi Viztoria[TK] Posted September 24, 2023 Author Report Share Posted September 24, 2023 Os envío las fotos con los cambios solicitados. I send you the photos with the requested changes. Accion photo 3 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chemi[Staff] Posted September 25, 2023 Report Share Posted September 25, 2023 Hi Manvi, and thank you for your EIB application! CRL and EIB Application Requirements: All required photos have been submitted, and on behalf of the entire D.O. staff we are pleased to welcome you to the rank of Expert Infantry. Congratulations! Other-Armor Fit/Assembly; In this area we review observations made by your fellow troopers and the DO team. Some observations may lead to suggestions to improve the overall look of your armor, and please keep in mind that we consider both text (CRL) and pictures (screen caps/reference images) when reviewing submissions. En primer lugar, me gustaría felicitarte por el trabajo realizado en tu armadura, y por el esfuerzo que has hecho para arreglar todo lo que te solicitamos. First of all, I would like to congratulate you for the work you have done on your armor, and for the effort you have made to fix everything we requested. Empezando por el casco. -L3. Idealmente, la posición de las orejas(y tornillos) seguirá de cerca el ángulo de los trapecios que están sobre ellas. Como hemos dicho en otras ocasiones, este "error" está presente en el 90% de las solicitudes, pero soro lo requeriremos para Centurión, en caso de que el casco se vea muy mal. Starting with the helmet. -L3. Ideally placement of the ears (and screws) should closely follow the rear angle of the Trap above them. As we have said on other occasions, this issue is present in 90% of the applications, but, it will only be a requirement for centurion level in case the helmet looks very bad... Reference Images -Hemos notado que tu ceja está un poco baja. Los TK´s las llevan más altas, al contrario que los Hero, por eso te recomendamos subirla un poco. -We noticed that your brow is sitting pretty low. Stunt TK´s trim sits higher, as opposed to Hero, so we are suggesting that you raise it a bit. Reference Image ANH Reference Image Hero [ -Tus antebrazos están un poco altos. Para una mejor apariencia general, y para ser más fiel a lo visto en pantalla, te recomendamos que los bajes un poco. -Your forearms are a little high. For a better "overall appearance", and to be more accurate, we recommend that you lower them a bit. Reference Images -La posición del detonador(TD) está un poco alta. Su posición correcta sería a la misma altura que la del cinturón, por eso te recomendamos que lo bajes un poco. -The position of the TD is a little high. Its correct position would be at the same height as the belt, so we recommend that you lower it a little. Reference Images -Parece que hay restos de pegamento en uno de tus guantes. Muy fácil de solucionar, quita el pegamento con cuidado y tu armadura se verá genial. -It looks like there are some glue on one of your gloves. Easy fix, remove that glue carefully so your armor looks great. Reference Images Centurion Requirements: In this section we prepare you for our highest tier of approval. Because Centurion photos must show more detail than EIB, items pertaining to Level 3 might be seen there and not here and additional photos may be required. We try to point out all that we can from what we are able to clearly see, but the final accuracy is the responsibility of the trooper. Nada que añadir aquí. Nothing to add here. Congratulations Manvi!!! Espero ver tu solicitud de Centurión muy pronto! Congratulations Manvi!!! I hope to see your Centurion application very soon! P.D.: No olvides solicitar tu diploma en este link. P.S.:Don't forget to request your certificate here. 2 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gmrhodes13[Staff] Posted September 25, 2023 Report Share Posted September 25, 2023 Congratulations and welcome to Expert Infantry and the EI Honor Gallery 3 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TKSpartan[Staff] Posted September 25, 2023 Report Share Posted September 25, 2023 Congratulations Trooper !! Welcome to EIB. Felicitaciones Manvi. Bienvenida al nivel Experto de Infantería !! 2 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Escrich Trooper[TK] Posted September 26, 2023 Report Share Posted September 26, 2023 Congrats Manvi, YOU RULES!!! Centurion is coming... 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
toniltd[TK] Posted September 26, 2023 Report Share Posted September 26, 2023 Enhorabuena Manvi por tu nivel de experto, ahora a por el de centurión, buen trabajo Trooper. Saludos. 3 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Manvi Viztoria[TK] Posted September 26, 2023 Author Report Share Posted September 26, 2023 Muchas gracias a todos por las felicitaciones. Gracias especialmente a Chemi por su ayuda, sus recomendaciones y el tiempo dedicado. Sin él esto no sería posible. Gracias de verdad. Manvi Viztoria, TK-16970, "Señora con coquilla" "Protectora de los animales" Orgullo Asperger. 3 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
giskard8[Staff] Posted October 2, 2023 Report Share Posted October 2, 2023 Congratulations Trooper. Welcome to EIB! 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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