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DZFireMedic requesting Pre-Approval Review (AM) ANH Stunt


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Good evening all,

 

I’m requesting pre-approval for my TK ANH Stunt build. Any and all critiques are welcome for basic, as well as any EIB or Centurion tips as well. Thank you in advance for your time and consideration.

 

Derek Zink

Florida Garrison, Makaze Squad hopeful

Armor Maker: AM

Helmet: AM

Cloth Belt: Trooper Bay

Neck Seal: Darmans Props

Boot Maker: Imperial Boots

Blaster Maker: Praetorian Blasters

Height: 6’4”

Weight: 235Lbs

TK: ANH Stunt

 

Much assistance provided by:

Ukswrath

 

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Again, thank you all for your careful consideration and time.

 

-DZFireMedic

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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Hi Derek, looking excellent for an easy basic approval.

 

For EIB and Centurion  levels, you may want to check the CRL statements  at 

 http://databank.501st.com/databank/Costuming:TK_anh_stunt   so you can read in detail and  work on it.

 

Looking at your build I would suggest as CRL states

 

  • Correct 'Hovi mic' aerator tips are present. Screens used shall be of a wide type mesh, with the rim of the mic and the inside white or painted white.

 

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I know there's experienced people here that can suggest a few more adjustement later.

 

Good luck Derek .

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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Nice work, a clean build, I don't see much that should keep you from basic approval.

 

A few things you could improve on for higher level acceptance.

 

Butt plate is pulling inwards and overlapping the kidney plate, I came up with a tab behind system which helps stop them moving in or out

 

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Belt could come up a smidge

 

There should be little gap at the shoulders between armor and the shoulder bells, you have a lot of black showing, perhaps try tightening the elastic, double over usually helps.

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There should be no paint on the gum areas around the teeth. 

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Soft hand guards are required for L3, also you have a lot of black area at the wrists, I would bring your biceps down a little and also move the forearms closer to the wrists to reduce this gap.

 

May need some thinner elastic straps on your shoulder bridges, can see a lot of white on the side.

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Shoulder bridges are only just sitting on the back plate, not sure if you can adjust this, perhaps try tightening the elastic between.

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You have a lot of gap between the thigs and shins at the rear, perhaps bring down the thighs a little, they appear to be almost touching the butt plate.

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Good luck with approval, look forward to seeing you at EIB and Centurion

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Submitted application and request for approval last night and was just approved by my GML! Waiting to hear back from Legion for my official indoc! Thanks for everyone’s help!


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Congratulations trooper hope to see you issued with number soon, be looking forward to seeing you at EIB.

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On 7/13/2019 at 10:48 PM, DZFireMedic said:

Submitted application and request for approval last night and was just approved by my GML! Waiting to hear back from Legion for my official indoc! Thanks for everyone’s help!


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Congratulations on approval!  You'll do the Emperor proud :)

See you at EIB? ;)

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Congrats on your approval, Derek!  Now that you are good to go, you are fortunate enough to be in Makaze Squad territory (my last Squad).  They have well over 200+ troops a year there. so you have the opportunity to attend a ton of events.  If when you meet Gary senior (or junior) please give them my best.

 

One thing I would suggest is applying for Legion Access here at the FISD.  It;s easy to do, and it will open up many new areas here that you can check out.

https://www.whitearmor.net/forum/topic/16-501st-trooper-status-requests-include-link-to-your-501st-profile-in-your-request/

 

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