Glen, how do you mean the canvas is too wide? Too long maybe but not too wide hehe I do agree it could be an inch or two shorter, there's a lot of extra on the side of the TD.
I don't think it's an EIB requirement but I do agree it would probably be better (for yourself) if the holster moves to the front a bit more, this for better accessibility of your blaster.
I would like to see a more close up picture of the thigh ammo belt but I think Glen is right about the height, it should come down just a little.
In addition to what glen said about the detonator, what's the white stuff on the other side? Velcro?
Glen is indeed right about the dropboxes but he's also right where he says it's a Centurion requirement really. I don't think it'll be a problem for your EIB (although I'm not the DO lol) but I do think you might want to order some backs/inserts for the dropboxes (there's a sale thread on these forums ).
Are the tube stripes on the helmet also handpainted (with an overlay) or decals? They seem to be on there like the idealized way, not like the handpainted way (of course, I could be wrong but I can't really tell). This doesn't matter for your EIB I believe but if you would like to go centurion next (you should! ), then you might want to take a look at them
Anyways, I think you're mostly there. Like Glen said, it's probably just a few minor tweaks before and you're there