Looking good, just need a couple of small tweaks to really take it to the next level
Helmet is tilted and not central to the armor
I would try to even out the gaps between elbow/bicep and the front of the forearms, just makes for a better appearance.
Try to get your cover strips straight front on.
Looks like you may be rotating your arms in, perhaps to reduce the gap at the shoulder bells, this pushes the shoulder bells away at the top of the shoulders, may need some tighter strapping, many double over elastic.
Back, helmet on slant and not central.
You could trim the extra belt material if you wished to.
There doesn't seem to be much overlap from the shoulder straps to the backplate, your GML may ask for closer photos.
Closure of calves not quite straight and small gap between (more for EIB)
For EIB make sure your ab/kidney align at the top, they will move when you move but you can adjust between photos.
You also have your belt/holster caught up on the left side
On the helmet side, tube stripes for L2:
Ideally, the tube stripes are positioned approximately a pencil width from the side of the cheek.
Yours appear to have a bigger gap at the back.
A few things for L2 on the rear traps, they are a little more rounded on your helmet than references.
Also the stripes sit a little lower and not quite as long.
Did you countersink your ear screws?, they just look to be pulling an a little high
For L2 make sure there is no paint on the gums and try to straighten the tops of the vocoder
You could bring up your belt just a touch (I know you've adjusted it a couple of times )
The top of the ABS belt shall sit at or just above the bottom of the central and vertical ab button panels. A slight overlap is suggested, but not required.
Can't remember if we talked about your large ab plate previously, can't see from your images but you may have over trimmed the base, should have a flat area at the base.
Also try to have well lit photos, a few areas a little hard to see like the bottom of vocoder and hovi's. GML's (GWL's) love a contrasting background
I don't think you will have much trouble for base approval but that's dependent on your GML, for higher levels definitely a few tweaks