@Sly11 Ok so I've done a pass now, and I have a few colors to help out with the feedback!
Observations
Misspellings
Suggestions
1. Check usage of capital "S" and lowercase "s" in "Flight suit"
2. Four distinct sections, but only three dots - could be good to have four dots even if Left winglet/Right winglet can be combined
3. Check the wording of "jetpack" or "jet pack" and decide which one to use
4. Misspelled "Bacplate" and check wording of "backplate" or "back plate" and decide which one to use
5. Question: what is a "belt proper", "Coton" misspelled, "section" should be "sections", "visibaly" misspelled, two spaces in sentence, "chamfer" should be "chamfers"
6. "*he" misspelling
7. "Hanplates" misspelled, check the wording of "flightsuit" or "flight suit" and decide which one to use, check the wording of "hand plates" or "handplates", "three facets." text after a completed sentence should be removed, "symetrical" misspelled, "Hand Plates" with capital P, question: should "glove back." be "the back of the glove."?