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davethedeal Requesting Pre Approval Review (Anovos)


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David Deal
Devastator Squad, Wisconsin Garrison
Armor: Anovos
Helmet: Anovos
Belt: Kittell
Neck seal: Anovos
Boots: Silver Street, painted by me (https://us.asos.com/silver-street/silver-street-chelsea-boots-in-black-leather/prd/9108526?iid=9108526&custref=161837311&affid=14564&channelref=email&orderref=369212623)

Blaster: haven't started on that yet
Height: 5'8"
Weight: 195lbs
TK type: ANH Stunt

Build thread: https://www.whitearmor.net/forum/topic/45948-newbie-daves-anovos-build/?tab=comments#comment-632117 (I removed most of the photos from my build thread so that I'd have enough available space to upload the photos below)

 

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Nice work, just a couple of tweaks. 

 

Looks like there is something going on with your right shoulder bell, it's not pulled in as much as the left, also what elastic are you using across the bottom of the bells, it looks quite big?

 

Ideally the belt should sit just under the bottom ab button, it appears yours is covering that button.

 

Should be ok for basic but some of the paint on your teeth is on the gums, you could remove this excess paint with tooth picks.

 

Forearms could come down a touch to give you a little more room to move at the elbows, will also close the gap at the wrists.

 

The right shin looks like the cover strip at the back isn't quite closed.

 

Add a little foam to behind the sniper plate to keep it away from your thigh as it may hit when walking.

 

Mic (hovi) tips could be painted white just on the rim.

 

Looks like the rivets on your thigh ammo strip need painting white too.

 

As I say just a couple of tweaks and you'll be a shoe in, but I'm sure as it your pretty close to basic approval.

 

 

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I think you're off to a good start.  Here are a couple of minor things I spotted:

Alignment on the side looks off - The rivets should line up horizontally and the tops of each section should be aligned as well.  Looks like you're high on the left and low on the right (back plate that is).  It's also overlapped on the right side.

 

There's also something funky going on with your right shoulder strap.

Tube stripes look a tad low as well.

I'd also look for helmet shots straight on from all 4 sides.

Good luck!

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