JWard Posted February 22, 2017 Report Share Posted February 22, 2017 Basic Information Name: Jen Ward Legion ID: 70305 Garrison: Midwest Garrison Mandatory Information Armor Maker: Anovos Helmet Maker: Anovos Blaster Type: Hyperfirm Optional Information Height: 5'7" Weight: 155lbs. Boots Maker: TK Boots Canvas Belt: gazmosis Electronics: AKER Neal Seal Type: Darman Holster Maker: Anovos Full Body Pictures Armor Detail Pictures Helmet Detail Pictures Blaster Detail Accessory Detail Photos Thank you for your consideration. I look forward to constructive criticism. If anything else is needed, please do not hesitate to ask. Cheers! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
justjoseph63[Staff] Posted February 22, 2017 Report Share Posted February 22, 2017 Some really nice finishing touches on that armor, Jen! I like the fact that you updated the hovi-mic tips, got rid of the crappy Anovos canvas belt, and your ab/kidney connections are spectacular. I get the feeling you are aiming for Centurion, and you are well on your way! The only small things I see is that you may need for that is to widen the paint on your ab buttons just a hair, and the belt may have to come up a bit in the front. An awesome job on this armor! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Addertime[TK] Posted February 22, 2017 Report Share Posted February 22, 2017 Lookin' good trooper! Very nice work on the thermal detonator. Looks perfect. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sly11[Admin] Posted February 25, 2017 Report Share Posted February 25, 2017 Hi Jen, impressive armour build. Could you please post up a photo of the opposite side of your blaster. Thank you Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JWard Posted February 25, 2017 Author Report Share Posted February 25, 2017 Hi Jen, impressive armour build. Could you please post up a photo of the opposite side of your blaster. Thank you Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sly11[Admin] Posted February 26, 2017 Report Share Posted February 26, 2017 Thank you, wont be too much longer Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sly11[Admin] Posted February 27, 2017 Report Share Posted February 27, 2017 Hey Jen welcome to your EI review, lets get into it!! CRL and EIB Application Requirements: All submission photos have been posted. Your armor displays all the necessary elements to qualify for level 2. Welcome to Expert Infantry trooper! Other-Armor Fit/Assembly: In this section we review observations made by your fellow troopers and ourselves. Some observations may lead to suggestions to improve the overall look of your armor. If any suggestion affects any application, it will be listed separately in the above or below sections. Love your attention to detail, you have hit the ground running with he Anovos helmet, fantastic upgrades Jen. We only have a few alignment/dressing issues that will help you look more balanced , so here we go. Lets start from the shoulders and work down, You still have a small gap at the very top, that can come in by shortening those Bell to shoulder bridge straps Reference image Next we have a couple of very minor tweaks that will take you only seconds to make. If you could drop the left Bicep down a touch to match the gap on the opposite arm, and raise the belt so it sits either right at the base or slightly overlapping the main Ab button plate, you will look spot on. Reference image Ok Jen, last couple of items and we are done. Again just some strap adjustment to get the back plate sitting right on top of the kidney plate for perfection. So you could either shorten them or maybe use a wider stronger elastic to keep them sitting together. I can see that the butt plate pops out at the ends, and looking at the internal strapping I think this is also easily remedied. Relocate or add an extra two straps closer to the ends of the plates and this should reign the ends in. If you find the butt plate has insufficient flex, try reducing the amount of return edge you have at the sides and the three angles as you get to the V shape at the bottom. Centurion Suggestions: In this section Uk or myself may suggest recommended or required repairs prior applying for the Centurion level however, the accuracy it is ultimately up to the trooper. To be honest, its really the fine tuning that we have mentioned above that will make you a shining example of a Centurion, so if you can do those few things, we will hopefully see you in the Centurion reviews very soon. Congratulations yet again on a wonderfully clean and tidy build. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
justjoseph63[Staff] Posted February 27, 2017 Report Share Posted February 27, 2017 Welcome to the rank of EIB, Jen! Just a few small tweaks and you will be ready for Centurion! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RLH2515[TK] Posted February 28, 2017 Report Share Posted February 28, 2017 Awesome job trooper ! Sent from my iPhone using Tapatalk Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JWard Posted February 28, 2017 Author Report Share Posted February 28, 2017 Super excited!! Thank you all!! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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