I'm not agreeing completely with Charles. The thigh cover strips are not supposed to go all the way down, as he suggests. And the back of the shin "gap" is a result of the hook and elastic method that can be spotted if looking carefully. So that's not a problem.
The knee ammo belt is riveted in the wrong position though. The rivet should be in the top corner. Rather than 10% down and 40% in as yours, 5% down and 5% in is a better position. Futhermore the radius of the rounded bottom of the knee belt is too small. It should be roughly twice as large. A good tip on this is to place a paint spray can on the belt lined up with the outer belt boxes and trace the can until you get to 90 degrees and then just go vertically straight up.
As for the bowing out kidney I would recommend taking a look at that. It may need some work on your shims. Overall, I think AP is too small for your frame.
I do not see a need to shorten any of the torso elastics, but I would suggest shortening the elastics holding your shoulder bells.
I would also suggest moving the shoulder bridges (by this I mean the ribbed plastic parts) slightly back in order to be able to glue them down properly and not have that gap between them and the chest when seen from the side.
And for the helmet paintjob I suggest you go over it once more with a fine brush and do another layer on the black lines, as well as the grey frown. It will help to smooth out the lines, and make them look less jagged.
But for EIB approval, this is still an easy pass.