Joshua, nice job on your build.
I agree, ESB definitely does not have enough people attacking it so you will not have so many people shimming in.
Tony just mentioned you have to work on the overlapping on the chest and back. With your height it surprises me that this is an issue, but you can clearly see in your pictures that they extend over the ab and kidney respectively.
Also, you are missing a picture of the front detail of the thermal detonator.
You are also missing a picture of the cod rivet and also the snaps on your butt plate. You would also have to show the strap connection between the two as well.
You are almost there.
Good Luck Bud!