I see a couple things.
Helmet section about the ears, there is mention of the grey being outlined with black. I do not believe any current fem troopers have that nor do I agree that it should be there.
Next, the wording of the closer of the back of the shin is very suggestive, meaning that if someone needs to have some extension strips installed on the back of the shins to help close the gap, then they are essentially disqualified simply due to their size and the way that the common kit for this was constructed.
I believe a simple change of words will eliminate this problem.
EDIT
I also dont like the wording "flat soled" is correct for the boots. There is a very small heel. To me, flat soled is more like a clone trooper boot than the Jes boot that has been accepted