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Overall looking good, there area few things for basic, and a few adjustments will be needed for higher level 2 and 3 (EIB and Centurion)
Belt should come up at the back.
Detonator end caps, gaps and panel incorrectly sized
Top of rear calves cover strip should stop under the top ridge
You can also remove the sharp corners on the rear of the forearms, if you wish. Also nip the corners (cut or round off) so they don't catch when moving
Tighter strapping between the back plate and kidney may reduce the gap shown.
For higher levels
Shoulders could come inwards at the front to reduce the gap
Belt could come up a touch
The top of the ABS belt shall sit at or just above the bottom of the central and vertical ab button panels. A slight overlap is suggested, but not required.
You could cut the extra material from the ends of your forearms under the biceps, they can catch when moving. You could also bring the down a touch just to give you a bit more room.
Thighs could come up a touch, will give you some room at the knees. Also adding some stiff foam behind the sniper plate can push forward to stop catching on the thigh.
Also noticed the left leg thigh is on an angle, as I have very thin legs I added some foam to the insides of the thighs to keep them central.
Also match gaps between forearms and gloves/handplates
Drop boxes should stop at the end of the plastic belt
For Level 3, the corners of the plastic ammo belt shall be trimmed at a 45 degree angle that meets the outer edge of the cloth belt.
For a more screen accurate look, it is suggested that the top of the rear ridge of the sniper plate be aligned with the top ridge of the calf. Also note that the sides are angled rather than curved.
Shoulder straps on the rear should sit on the backplate, elastic loops can help this but you may also need a hot water bath
You could add some scrap material behind the gaps in the lower ridges, also fill the seam with ABS paste or miliput or silicon (or something similar).
Looks like your inner thigh ammo strip is attached incorrectly, it should be mounted to the lower ridge just like the outside
Front views
Back views
You may need tighter strapping on the sides to reduce the gap, doubled over elastic can help.
Han snap should not be painted should be silver
Also for L3 you would need silicon handplates
Hand guards shall be latex or latex-like, solid white or painted white, and affixed to rubber gloves with no visible strapping or stitching.
A few other things on the helmet
Vocoder should be sharper
Hovi tips rim painted, also white inside
Tube stripes should be the same gap from the cheek, yours angles downwards towards the back
A little hard to make out some other helmet details.
So a few adjustments for basic and I would highly encourage you to also seek the higher levels approval once you've been cleared for basic.
Good luck