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Dado3d Requesting Pre Approval Review (ANOVOS)


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Hello all, After almost a year in the making, with the help of my garrison brothers, here's my ANH TK. Hope to get some feedback to improve it or to know if it's good for basic approval. Thanks!

 

1.  First/last name: Eduardo Delgado

2.  Future Garrison: Garrison Peru

3.  Armor maker: Anovos

4.  Helmet maker: Anovos

5.  Cloth belt maker: Anovos

6.  Neck seal maker: Hatsuyume cosplay

7.  Boot maker: TK Boots

8.  Blaster maker: None

9.  Height: 5.4 ft (short trooper here)

10. Weight: 144 lbs

11. TK type: TK ANH stunt

12: Trooper(s) who significantly helped: TK-24275, TK-29310, SL-65321.

 

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Nice work trooper, just a couple of things you could address.

You have quite a large gap between your tops of thighs and ab/cod, you could probably drop your ab/cod plate a little to reduce that gap, your chest is covering the top of the smaller ab plate ;) . Biceps could come down a little, just to reduce the gap at the elbows but not a big issue.

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Belt could come upwards so it sits just under the bottom ab plate button.

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Make sure your shins align with the thighs, at the moment they are rotated a little.

 

Ideally tube stripes are a pencil width from the sides of the cheek

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Appears your shoulder straps are not secured fully at the front, looks like a gap in between.

Also there should not be any rivets on the sniper knee plate sides.

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Can't quite make out your thigh belt rivets but they should be painted white

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You have some bunching on under suit in between the chest and arms. You could also trip a little more out of the lens areas

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A few tweaks and you'll look awesome.

 

Good luck with approval 

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