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Name: Mark Gambino

Username: MightyAtom

Knightfall Garrison

Melbourne, Australia

 

https://www.501st.com/members/displaymemberdetails.php?userID=33163

 

Armour: AP

Helmet: AP

Blaster: Premier Props (Etsy)

 

Height: 6'

Weight: 178lbs

Boots: Imperial Boots

Canvas Belt: Imperial Issue (Kittle)

Hand Plates: [mention=22112]justjoseph63[/mention]

Electronics: [mention=35426]MissionTrooper[/mention]Arduino Nano

Neck seal: Darman's Props

Holster: AP

 

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Adding thigh ammo pack rivet interior photos
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Nice work trooper, a great build overall, a couple of suggestions before the DO's get here:

Your shoulder straps on the back are not quite centered to the backplate, also there is white excess elastic showing

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Noticed your cocking lever is silver, these are normally black

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Could you also post thigh ammo strip inside connectors, I know the DO's like to see that ;) 

 

Good luck with approval although I doubt you will need it. 

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1 hour ago, gmrhodes13 said:
Nice work trooper, a great build overall, a couple of suggestions before the DO's get here:
Your shoulder straps on the back are not quite centered to the backplate, also there is white excess elastic showing
E1eFNQl.jpg.b2ad7e05cddce7371e65700c895bf633.jpg
 
Noticed your cocking lever is silver, these are normally black
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Could you also post thigh ammo strip inside connectors, I know the DO's like to see that  
 
Good luck with approval although I doubt you will need it. 

Nice catches there! Those pesky elastics. And what a great pic ref of the E-11.

 

Thank you. I'll add pics now.

Sent from my Imperial Comlink
 

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*Knightfall Garrison. Missing the “K”.

Good luck with your application. I’m sure it’ll be an easy pass.
*raises fist to air* Autocorrect!!!

Thanks mate!

Sent from my Imperial Comlink

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Wow, Mark... just WOW!  Awesome job on this build, sir, and great attention to detail (I see you have really done your research)!  Mario will be with ya' soon, so hang in there.

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54 minutes ago, TKSpartan said:

Hi Mark,  almost ready with your review. 

 

Could you please add a close photo of your boots?  Sides and front.

 

Thanks. :salute:

Hey Mario, Great, thanks! I've added two photos of my boots to the above. The white balance seems a little off though, I assure you they are white as white!

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  • TKSpartan changed the title to TK84212 requesting ANH STUNT EIB status (AP) (10013)

Hi Mark, and thank you for your EIB application! 

 

CRL and EIB Application Requirements:

All required photos have been submitted, and on behalf of the entire D.O. staff we are pleased to welcome you to the rank of Expert Infantry.  Congratulations!  :salute:

 

Other-Armor Fit/Assembly;

In this area we review observations made by your fellow troopers and the DO team. Some observations may lead to suggestions to improve the overall look of your armour. Note that we consider both text (CRL) and pictures (screen caps/reference images) when reviewing submissions.

                                                                                   

                                                            ***************************************************

I followed your Building Thread till your pre approval submission and let me say you did an awesome work with your build .  

 

Let's start with the Helmet.

 

We are suggesting to clean up a bit your vocoder to reflect the more accuracy the the screen used helmet. This is an easy fix ! 

 

 

                                                                                                                            Reference Images 

O6Pdhcn.jpg?1                            VW9l6sB.jpg?1     t6ljeu5.jpg?2

 

 

        

 

 

                                                                                   ***************************************************

Centurion Requirements;

In this section we prepare you for Centurion.  Because Centurion photos show more detail than EIB, items pertaining to Centurion might be seen there and not here and additional photos may be required. We try to point out all that we can from what we see, but the final accuracy is the responsibility of the trooper.

 

 

 

This could be just a dressing issue or a hot bath need, but your left shoulder bridge seems is not quite centered to the backplate, also there is a little "curl" of elastic showing, just something to consider every time you suit up.  . 

 

                                                                                                                                                                              Reference Images

   

DnQ2838.jpg?1    5bXSdOi.jpg?1       gqtHZ4o.jpg

 

 

CRL L3: Ideally there no gap between the abdomen and kidney armor. Abdominal and Kidney Plate align horizontally at top

Looking closely to your ab to kidney connection, we noticed that the kidney plate protrudes a bit from the ab plate and causes a noticeable gap  on the left side, this could be just a simple strapping adjustment.

                                                                                                                                                                     Reference Images 

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CRl L3: The top of the ABS ammo belt should sit at or just above the bottom of the central and vertical abdomen button panels.

It would be necessary to raise your AB belt a bit to achieve the L3 requirement , in your case it seems that you already have a Velcro piece on the abdominal plate so it is easy to adjust.

 

                                                                                                                                                  Reference Images 

YdW3LPv.jpg?1              oSsuucN.jpg?1       bAki9UI.jpg

 

 

 

Finally , your E11 Blaster.

Your your cocking lever is silver color and these are normally black , a little silver (weathering) is ok,  as you can see in the reference images. Just a simple detail and easy to fix in a quick painting session. 

 

                                                                                                                    Reference Images 

y2V7A9g.jpg                             ZElFia9.jpg           MxWfx08.jpg?1

 

 

Congratulations again and looking forward for your Centurion submission soon.  Well done Trooper !!!   :th_AnimatedBravoSmiley:

 

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  • TKSpartan changed the title to TK84212 requesting ANH STUNT EIB status (AP) (1013)
9 hours ago, TKSpartan said:

Hi Mark, and thank you for your EIB application! 

 

CRL and EIB Application Requirements:

All required photos have been submitted, and on behalf of the entire D.O. staff we are pleased to welcome you to the rank of Expert Infantry.  Congratulations!  :salute:

 

Other-Armor Fit/Assembly;

In this area we review observations made by your fellow troopers and the DO team. Some observations may lead to suggestions to improve the overall look of your armour. Note that we consider both text (CRL) and pictures (screen caps/reference images) when reviewing submissions.

                                                                                   

                                                            ***************************************************

I followed your Building Thread till your pre approval submission and let me say you did an awesome work with your build .  

 

Let's start with the Helmet.

 

We are suggesting to clean up a bit your vocoder to reflect the more accuracy the the screen used helmet. This is an easy fix ! 

 

 

                                                                                                                            Reference Images 

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                                                                                   ***************************************************

Centurion Requirements;

In this section we prepare you for Centurion.  Because Centurion photos show more detail than EIB, items pertaining to Centurion might be seen there and not here and additional photos may be required. We try to point out all that we can from what we see, but the final accuracy is the responsibility of the trooper.

 

 

 

This could be just a dressing issue or a hot bath need, but your left shoulder bridge seems is not quite centered to the backplate, also there is a little "curl" of elastic showing, just something to consider every time you suit up.  . 

 

                                                                                                                                                                              Reference Images

   

DnQ2838.jpg?1&key=9df8c53f7ceb76b4abeed49ee91a188c55975f9655f7388f1610be33412f3f1d    5bXSdOi.jpg?1&key=9372958e1d21e5b5901d0d39e554f205551016f01446e49cb1a75161e84213b0       gqtHZ4o.jpg&key=4ee52c1c5c29746009db564e32564a2979a8bebedfb4de259d16d0d5e3708c1b

 

 

CRL L3: Ideally there no gap between the abdomen and kidney armor. Abdominal and Kidney Plate align horizontally at top

Looking closely to your ab to kidney connection, we noticed that the kidney plate protrudes a bit from the ab plate and causes a noticeable gap  on the left side, this could be just a simple strapping adjustment.

                                                                                                                                                                     Reference Images 

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CRl L3: The top of the ABS ammo belt should sit at or just above the bottom of the central and vertical abdomen button panels.

It would be necessary to raise your AB belt a bit to achieve the L3 requirement , in your case it seems that you already have a Velcro piece on the abdominal plate so it is easy to adjust.

 

                                                                                                                                                  Reference Images 

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Finally , your E11 Blaster.

Your your cocking lever is silver color and these are normally black , a little silver (weathering) is ok,  as you can see in the reference images. Just a simple detail and easy to fix in a quick painting session. 

 

                                                                                                                    Reference Images 

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Congratulations again and looking forward for your Centurion submission soon.  Well done Trooper !!!   :th_AnimatedBravoSmiley:

 

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Thank you! This is amazing!

With all the advice I received and the other excellent builds out there that I poured over, it feels like a real team effort. Thanks to everyone who helped me!

I've made notes of your suggestions for a Centurion submission and will get onto fixes this weekend.

Thanks again!

Sent from my Imperial Comlink
 

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