Tivy[TK] Posted August 26, 2019 Report Share Posted August 26, 2019 (edited) Hello everyone! this is my application for EIB!! TK -16790 Request the status of ESB EIB [AFP] Soldier Information Name: José Luís Delgado FISD Forum Name: Tivy Legion ID: 16790 Garnison: Spanish Garnish Legion Profile: https://www.501st.com/members/displaymember.php?userID=30801&costumeID=126 Height: 171cm Weight: 74 kg Costume Information Armor Maker: AFP (Armor Factory Props) / ABS Helmet Maker: AFP (Armor Factory Props) / ABS Neck seal: AFP (Armor Factory Props) Belt: AFP (Armor Factory Props) / ABS Boots: AFP (Armor Factory Props) Holster: AFP (Armor Factory Props) Blaster: E-11 Resin / AFP Selfmade Rubber (Armor Factory Props) Trooper Details: Front Back Left Left arm raised Right Right arm raised In action Ab / Kidney Gap Detail : Left Right Manual plate detail Hello! Boots Blaster E-11 D-Ring Detail Neck seal Holster Ammo Belt Thermal Detonator Helmet Hovi mic detail: S-Trim Lens color Body details Interior strapping Sniper Plate Details Thigh Ammo Strip Rivet connection inside thigh Edited August 27, 2019 by Tivy 2 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TKSpartan[Staff] Posted August 28, 2019 Report Share Posted August 28, 2019 Looking Great Trooper !! Good luck with your application. Excelente Jose Luis. Buena Suerte !!! 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tivy[TK] Posted August 29, 2019 Author Report Share Posted August 29, 2019 Thank you very much, I hope to be lucky 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shashachu[TK] Posted August 29, 2019 Report Share Posted August 29, 2019 Looks great, José! I'll be with you soon. 2 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tivy[TK] Posted August 29, 2019 Author Report Share Posted August 29, 2019 thank you Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TxuTxi[TK] Posted August 31, 2019 Report Share Posted August 31, 2019 C’mon bro! The EIB os your!!!Enviado desde mi iPhone utilizando Tapatalk 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Anxo200[TK] Posted September 2, 2019 Report Share Posted September 2, 2019 Jose, the effort to do things well will be rewarded. Look excelent your armor, get lucky 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shashachu[TK] Posted September 7, 2019 Report Share Posted September 7, 2019 Hi José, Thanks for your application! You have a really nice ESB build. CRL and EIB Application Requirements All required photos are now in and, after review, we are pleased to welcome you to Expert Infantry rank. On behalf of the DO team and myself, many congratulations! Note that for ESB reviews, while we do our best to use only ESB reference images, since ESB suits are mostly reused ANH suits, we will sometimes use ANH armor as reference. Other-Armor Fit/Assembly In this area we review observations made by your fellow troopers and the DO team. Some observations may lead to suggestions to improve the overall look of your armor. Note that we consider both text (CRL) and pictures (screen caps/reference images) when reviewing submissions First, your ab plate is a bit large, and overhanging the edge of the panel it's sitting on top of. We're suggesting to trim it back a bit. Reference Image: Next, your butt plate is sticking out some. This is a very common problem, so we're suggesting that you add/adjust the strapping. Ideally it should sit right below the kidney plate. Reference Image: Next, there is quite a large gap between at the top of your thighs. Although we'd ideally like to see as little black as possible, for the gaps that are there, it cleans up the look to have them even., so we're recommending that you raise your thighs to reduce the upper gap, even though that will cause a bit of black to show between the thighs and shins. Reference Image: Finally, great job on aligning your sniper knee. In order to go for that extra bit of screen accuracy, we're recommending you trim the return edge back a bit. Reference Image Finally, a small detail. Your ammo pack rivet is a bit too close to the edge of your ammo pack compared to the screen-used suits. If you'd like to go the extra mile, you could move it in some. You would have to fill the old hole with ABS paste. Reference Image: Centurion Requirements In this section we prepare you for Centurion. More photos may be requested in the future that allow us to make better decisions on possible adjustments. If there are any areas of concern they will be discussed here. Because Centurion photos show much more detail than EIB, items to pertaining to Centurion might be seen there and not here. We try to point out all that we can from what is seen, but the final accuracy is the responsibility of the trooper. First, while overall your helmet looks great, the teeth are unfortunately overtrimmed. Before applying for Centurion, we're asking you to fill in the extra space with ABS paste. Reference Image: Also, the black rank bar paint is very thin on your ear bumps. This should be a simple fix - just paint the bars slightly wider. Reference Image: Continuing on to the shoulders, the L3 CRL states: There should be a minimal gap between the shoulder armor and the chest/back plates. Your shoulder bell gap actually looks quite good, but there's still some gap at the top of the bells. You should tighten the strapping holding the shoulder bells on, as well as make sure to trim all the lower return edge off the bells so they sit closer to the chest. It may also just be a matter of relaxing your posture for the photos. Reference Images: Concluding with the belt, the L3 CRL states: The top of the ABS ammo belt should sit at or just above the bottom of the central and vertical abdomen button panels. Yours is sitting just a touch too low. On my own kit, I added two small strips of velcro to the belt to ensure it doesn't sag in the front. Reference Image: And that's it! I have full confidence in your ability to make the Centurion fixes, so I hope to see your application there soon. Now get out there and make Lord Vader proud! 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
giskard8[Staff] Posted September 7, 2019 Report Share Posted September 7, 2019 Congratulations trooper, welcome to the ranks! 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tivy[TK] Posted September 7, 2019 Author Report Share Posted September 7, 2019 thank you!! I'm very happy!! now to get the centurion Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TxuTxi[TK] Posted September 7, 2019 Report Share Posted September 7, 2019 Congratulations trooper!! Now to centu!!!! C’mon!!!!Enviado desde mi iPhone utilizando Tapatalk 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TxuTxi[TK] Posted September 7, 2019 Report Share Posted September 7, 2019 Congratulations trooper!! Now to centu!!!! C’mon!!!!Enviado desde mi iPhone utilizando Tapatalk 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aizenoso[TK] Posted September 7, 2019 Report Share Posted September 7, 2019 Congratulations man!!!!! Te queda genial, buen trabajo!! 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TxuTxi[TK] Posted September 7, 2019 Report Share Posted September 7, 2019 Congratulations trooper!! Now to centu!!!! C’mon!!!!Enviado desde mi iPhone utilizando Tapatalk 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gmrhodes13[Staff] Posted September 7, 2019 Report Share Posted September 7, 2019 Congratulations trooper and welcome to EI 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sly11[Admin] Posted September 7, 2019 Report Share Posted September 7, 2019 Congratulations José, welcome to the rank.Sent from my iPhone using Tapatalk 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TKSpartan[Staff] Posted September 9, 2019 Report Share Posted September 9, 2019 On 9/7/2019 at 12:31 AM, Tivy said: thank you!! I'm very happy!! now to get the centurion Great Trooper Welcome to EIB, now there's no way back, go for Centurion. Cheers 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ukswrath[Staff] Posted September 10, 2019 Report Share Posted September 10, 2019 Fantastic job Jose, welcome to EI brother 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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